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Post  khfreak358 Mon Jun 27, 2011 11:11 pm

Siks was blinded for a few seconds, but not before seeing the Dark Blast. Once it reached him, he was able to absorb the attack and redirect it back at Aleri, adding a bit of his own darkness along with it.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Tue Jun 28, 2011 1:08 am

"Fool." Aleri used Reversal to slade around it, then jumped forward and attempted to perform a dual-wield combo.
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Post  Whats_Up4444 Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:15 am

Richard, the man who specialized in NEO Pills. These capsules when ingested by a Nobody will have an unnatural effect. Such as manipulate their memories to have them being fast, or even erased their memories completely to create a Dusk out of them.

He has already done this three times. All who agreed on what was to happen.

Xiyum. The first of his subjects.
Xemla. The second.
And Hackx. The last.

One has fades.
One has joined a group to restore her existance.
And the last is simply wandering the worlds.

Richard may have not joined The Division, but he did agree to help them when in need.

He is also a Nobody. He does not wish to accuire a new persona. As he sees himself as the same person. He does see he has an existance and a role unlike most Nobodies.

His role is to perfect the NEO Pills. And help the Non-Existant Ones in need.
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay Tue Jun 28, 2011 2:20 am

<Mind responding to my post, Mr. Up?>
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Post  Whats_Up4444 Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:36 am

"What is this place. It...was almost like I was drawn to it".
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:40 am

"That's strange," Nikki said. "There's nothing special about this village."
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Post  Whats_Up4444 Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:18 am

"Well, maybe.....I was supposed to meet you?" White said.

XxxX

Kuroyuki Kokoro loaded her game and continued the story mode.

Yuki started to walk forward. She turned to the left amd continue down the path. She looked in front of her a saw a little lightning bolt spinning in the distance.

"That's my first symbol". She made a ran for it amd slowed down. She reached out with her right hand still holding her Keyblade. Her fingers just barely off the handle.

She touched the symbol and it glew in a yellow light. When the light faded, a piece of paper was pm the ground. She picked it up and opened it up. She released the string holding it together, and began to read it.

A frozen escape. A locked away dream.
Those who lost, those who came.
The one who was abondaned,
And the one to leave him. Only to find him again.


"I....knew I wasn't ready for the exam...I can't even solve the first riddle". Yuki said to herself.

<I wonder if anyone can actually solve this?>
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Post  Maverick Entity Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:46 pm

<A short distance away from Yuki, high up in the air>

"A curious riddle indeed" Gunamnex says in his usual tone.

"As much as I love word games, this is over my head for sure" Roland says. scratching his head over the words.

"She will figure it out though, she just has to utilize her hidden intellect" Gunamnex says with a smile. He begins spinning his keyblade around his fingertips.
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Post  khfreak358 Tue Jun 28, 2011 7:12 pm

Siks parried and attempted two stab forward with both of his own blades.
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Post  XGeass Tue Jun 28, 2011 9:23 pm

Daxma, Naxcel, and Xalen where walking down from the road from the memorial. Daxma just kept looking at at his right arm with the seal on it. "Why did he have bring this thing out." He said to himself as the seal starts to fade away in a golden light. "So why did you guys come to get me anyway?" Xalen asked. Naxcel turned to Xalen and said. "I'm not to sure but I think Daxma wanted you to look into his dreams. Isn't that right Dax?" Naxcel said turning to Daxma. "Yes but but there is something I want to check on fisrt before we do that." Daxma informed the two.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:21 pm

Aleri hooked Radiance with the teeth of Kingdom Key and Soulcrusher with the hook on Drakus. "Really? Try harder." He sent a pulse of energy through his weapons into Siks.
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Post  khfreak358 Tue Jun 28, 2011 10:27 pm

Siks released his weapons and backflipped away to avoid the energy pulse, summoning them back once he landed. He then stabbed his blades in an X-formation on the ground. In the top part of the X, Dark and Light energy began to form. It solidified after a few seconds and fired forth a large beam of Light and Darkness.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:10 am

Aleri's eyes widened before it connected, throwing him back into a wall of Gummis. "U...gh..." Wh... what... am I... doing here...? What... what am I fighting... fooooooor...? Lame Megaman X references aside... Ow. His weapons unsummoned as he fell to the floor. "G... Guh... " His eyes had returned to normal.

<By the way, there's a point to the "Ancient Keyblade" thing. Once it's reforged(?) it will be ten times awesomer. And more useful.>
<...Is it possible to reforge a Keyblade? Meh.>
<Sorry to cut the fight short. I decided that your attack was as good a finisher as any, and I was tired of the whole thing anyway. I have waaaay too many subplots planned for poor Al...>
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Post  khfreak358 Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:46 am

Siks sighed and dismissed his weapons. He walked up to Aleri and put an arm on his shoulder. "You okay, kid?"
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Post  Haar_Dragon Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:49 am

<Subplots? Well, he's doomed to be forgotten for eternity. By everyone.>

Ichiro yelled, "You threw an arrow at me!"

Dispatch flipped himself upside down and hung by his tail as he replied, "After you shot it at me. Good luck with that logic."

Daniel stood up, then nudged Ichiro and shook his head.
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:54 am

Aleri pulled himself up, coughing blood. "Agh... Well... I've got a couple of broken ribs... Nothing an Elixir can't fix." He reached into his pocket and searched, but found no healing items. "Crap, I wore the wrong coat... Got Curaga?"

<I'm about 80% sure everybody liked Rexial more anyway.>
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Post  khfreak358 Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:57 am

<Eh. Hard to say.>

"Yeah," he said, casting the requested spell on him. "There a reason you attacked me just now? Didn't really seem like you were yourself."
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Post  Haar_Dragon Wed Jun 29, 2011 2:01 am

<Yeah. To me, Rexial seemed awesome, Aleri just seems like kind of a screwup.>
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay Wed Jun 29, 2011 3:10 am

"I'm not sure... Perhaps fate did bring us together..."
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Wed Jun 29, 2011 5:01 pm

Aleri stood up. "I dunno... Didn't you attack me? I can't remember exactly, but I seem to have it stuck in my head that you want to kill me... And why not? Why heal me? You COULD have taken your chance to get rid of me. You were probably planning it anyway..."

<About the subplots... I'm chucking out half of them, 'cuz they suck. One such was "Aleri fails the Mark of Mastery exam after begging Gunamnex to test him in the first place". I decided on another one, just to get rid of the overrated "Dark and Light together" idea.>
<If you want, I could set Rexial to be more like my main character after a certain extreme bit of character developement I have planned. Unfortunately, it'll take time, which is moving REALLY slowly.>
<The reason Rexial didn't stay my main character was that he was a little bit of a Gary Stu. He only ever had one idiot moment. He was... difficult to hurt.>
<Oh, and by "screwup", d'you mean he's a screwed-up person, he screws up, or he's a screwed-up concept?>
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Post  khfreak358 Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:21 pm

"Well, I was a bit mad at you for what happened with Susan," he admitted, sounding calmer, "But, honestly, I think I just needed to try and get some hits on you a few times. To be fair, I think I was more jealous than I angry. I'm sure you didn't mean to walk in on her like that. And whether you enjoyed it or not is none of my business."
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Post  Maverick Entity Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:03 pm

<And I thought I was going to have to torture Aleri by tossing him repeatedly through light portals and lord knows what else, lol.>
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:42 pm

<Torturing Al is awfully fun, isn't it? ^_^ Rexial is somebody you want to befriend, Aleri's a punching bag. I'm sorry, sometimes I get mixed up between the concepts of my own characters within my head and how I write them. I can't be too sure how they come off sometimes.>

Aleri blinked and reached for his left arm. He grabbed... something, and yanked, wincing. He held up a familiar Sai in his hand, the blade covered in blood. "I didn't enjoy that at all." He muttered. "That, and I had to deal with just about everybody launching attacks at me... What do they think I am, their punching bag? Man, I think that once Nathan joined, everybody stopped respecting me. Well, I kinda lost my edge and then turned into this sloppy mess of a form. I guess that they don't respect me for a reason."

<I forget whether he already returned the Sai, so...
Well, more like I had the idea to return it earlier, and I can't remember whether I actually did that or not.>
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Post  khfreak358 Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:32 am

<Actually, it really just grazed his arm. It didn't stab him. But I'll go along with it. Razz>

Siks chuckled a bit at that and took the Sai from him. "I should probably give this back to her. And don't worry, I'm sure she's well over it by now. Oh, and I still have respect for you. After all, your Nobody recruited me."
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Post  NebulaGregarZX Thu Jun 30, 2011 1:43 am

Aleri chuckled. "I still have to BEAT some respect into a certain flame-elemental Key of Heart one of these days... Well, let's get back to that party." He opened a DC and stepped through, grabbing Siks' arm.
It would suck if the DC closed before he got through, or one of the monsters here attacking before he entered. These guys nearly ripped Ged apart, and he was here for all of five seconds. That, and I think they've gotten deadlier proportionally to our own strength growing...

<Plot that I still have to take care of:
Kizu's training schedual.
The mysterious shadow observing the Lost Key.
An old friend's return.
The new-and-improved Keyblade remade as a Spirit Weapon.>
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