Org. XIV (story)

<Neither its just alot of plot twists are coming one after the other.>

<its the last one don't worry.>

<Ok then. I wasn't trying to be mean and I am sorry if it came out that way its just if you hade planed for these points to the character it may have been better and had more of an impact if you spread out the time between them rather than one after the other......also how important is this thing you are planing for right now becuase I am half tempted to use a character I haven't used much who is a villain and this would be almost perfect chance to use him.>

Feel free its a huge impact ill pm you the details if that's okay

<Sure.>

Aleri stood up, turning to the Heartless. "Are you still here? Scram!" He raised one hand, generating a fireball the size of a basketball. "Bigger..." Then it grew to the size of a car. "Bigger...!" Tehn it became as large as a two-story house. "Bigger...!"

Now he was holding a ball of white-hot flames that would rival a skyscraper in terms of size.

"Perfect!"

He slammed it into the Invisible-type Heartless, burning it to cinders on impact.

"...Nuts, I overdid it again. At least it's gone, and we're not singed ourselves.."

"Thanks for that Aleri. You saved us."

"Hardly. I nearly killed us. And I really should've eliminated that thing sooner."

"Whohaho!" Erupted a voice followed with the sound of claping after Aleri destroyed the Heartless. "I have never seen an attack like that before! But than again slyaing a lesser bug like that wouldn't take much power to begin with..." The clapping than stopped and in a blur behind Aleri appeared a young man with crimson red hair. On his left eye he wore a eye-patch that held the Heartless emblem, his right eye glew a bight yellow that showed powerful darkness. "Now just who are you?"

"My name is Eira and who are you."

The young man never answered her question. He just stared at the group with a slight yet dangerous looking smile. "I was under the inpreasion this whole world was dead. Yet I found the lot of you here how odd...." He then looks over to Eira. "Tell me is that a keyblade you are holding?"

Aleri took a step forward. "Sorry to answer out-of-sequence. I am Alphonse Elric, an Alchemist." I'm gonna get a lot of grief for this one...

"Your right my home world is dead and yes its a keyblade and I have a rapier any other questions you have? Aleri who is this guy?"she held onto her keyblade

Aleri sighed. "No clue. And here I thought I could mess with him a little..."

>Eira, be careful. Don't give out names recklessly. He looks like he could be an enemy, so giving him information is a bad idea. This is why I haven't been using my Keyblade since we left. If he thinks I'm just a Mage, he won't know that I'm a physical fighter until it's too late. Then again, if he's a shrewd one, he'll probably be able to tell that I'm too physically fit to be a spell-slinging glass cannon.<

The young man looks at Eira and again at "Alphonse". "Oh Alphonse!? I have heard that name before in fact..." He than walks up to Aleri with the same cruel smile. "My name is Edward Elric how odd is that?!" He then disappears in a blur and reappears right next to Aliri with his arm around the Swordsmen shoulder. "Its just like we are brothers!"

<he might know about the basics of what I am but he doesn't know about me being a lcie.>

She backed away from the mysterious guy. "Who are you and why are you in my home world?

"...I found it pretty hilarious, too. I didn't think this world had television... Not sure you'd catch that." Aleri remarked. "Okay, so what's your real name? Mine is Aleri." He made no attempt to shrug off "Edward"'s arm.

>Careful. You probably have minimal experience dealing with these kinds of situations. Working for the Organization kinda puts you on the spot sometimes. You can't do anything that will alienate mysterious strangers, or they may turn out to have a group of their own, and decide that our organization is their enemy. We should try to avoid unneccesary bloodshed, and I'm sure that's one point you'll agree on.<

<your right. I wonder if this guy has a connection with Lance?>

She unwielded her keyblade and it disappeared in a flash of light.

"Oh what makes you think I am from this world?" "Edward said with a chuckle. "My name is.......Kan-ma, Kama! And as for what I am doing here....its kinda odd to ask that since you aren't meant to be here at all neither." He looks at the two for moment crossing his arms. "How about you tell me firts?"

"I don't own you and explanation for anything."

<I use brackets like this for Out Of Character text (OOC). I invert the brackets when my characters use their Mindlink ability to talk to other people through their minds. >Like this.< >

>I doubt it. Take a look at his eyepatch. He's a Heartless. Lance would've said something or at least reacted if he knew the guy.<

Aleri shook his head. "Sorry, but I don't feel like explaining. I'm still putting it together in my head, so whatever I tell you will be incomprehensive nonsense."

"Oh come on you could try right?" "Kama" said puting on a wide smile. "How about if you try telling me what the fuck you pathetic humans are doing here I will tell you the meaning of my name!" He said smilling like a child.

"To be honest, I don't think I want to know what your name means. We're just here to take care of some unfinished business, nothing to concern a sentient Heartless."

"So no telling me? What a shame...". "Kama's" smile disappeared and simply shook his head. "All the sam I think I will tell you the meaning of the name I gave you." He held out his hand and a scythe took form the darkness. "That name means scythe and now......" A wide small once again creeped on to his face. "I am boing to become your personal Grim Reaper!" He than swong the scythe at a blinding speed trying to cleve Aleri's head off.

Lance moved with blinding speed, blocking the attack with Tartarus, "How about you don't attack my friends and I won't destroy you." His voice was almost entirely Chaos as he glared at the assailant.