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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:18 am

Okay. Since you guys DID think it was a good idea, we are going to make our own topic for our own fanfics.

My fanfic, Dawn of Days, is a what-if KH fanfic. It's what if Roxas never join with Sora?what if he went back to Organization XIII? Well, Nomura wouldn't think of this, so this is what I think what would happened.

First: I need to re-write the first chapter because it was horrible and never finished.
Second: There's a huge time gap. But I will explain what happens betweeen the gaps.
Third: Expect the first chapter up in a few days.
Fourth: Roxas is awesome.
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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:20 am

<Dawn of Days opening>

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:34 am

^Hey look, a deluded fanboy.

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Post  NebulaGregarZX on Sat Apr 02, 2011 12:12 pm

<*Sigh*... It's his Fan-fic. You can flame people AFTER they've written it all out. Write your own Fan-fic if you think his sucks so much. Oh, wait, there's no Fan-fic to flame about yet!
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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:02 pm

<Eh. I was never a fan of the first of anything. >

<Sora is number one.>
<Roxas is number two.>

<Thus, I think Roxas is better.>

<Megatron is number one.>
<Starscream is number two.>

<Thus I think Starscream is better.>

<Let's not make this a who's better topic. We can make another topic for that. >_>>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:18 pm

Roxas is not as good as Sora. Roxas mooches off Sora. And Sora won, not even would win, but DID win, in combat. Sora>Roxas, thus, you are a deluded fanboy. I'm not saying the fanfic will be bad, just that Sora>Roxas and you're deluded if you think otherwise.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:31 pm

<No, you misunderstood. I said I THINK Roxas is better. Because he's number two to Sora. I always liked the second to everything.>

<So, first is the worst, and second is the best.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:41 pm

You THINK wrong. Sora is better. I just now explained why.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:46 pm

<Maybe think is the wrong word. Maybe LIKE is better.>

<I like Roxas better because he's number two.>

<Sora is better then Roxas. But that's why I like Roxas better.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 02, 2011 6:59 pm

Xigbar is number2. Roxas is number 13.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Sat Apr 02, 2011 7:34 pm

Whats_Up4444 wrote:<No, you misunderstood. I said I THINK Roxas is better. Because he's number two to Sora. I always liked the second to everything.>

<So, first is the worst, and second is the best.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 02, 2011 10:07 pm

Riku is number two to Sora. Roxas is still number 13.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Fri Apr 08, 2011 12:36 am

<Okay. I'm still writing. But I have the idea already done. It's gonna be awhile. Plus, being on the internet is kinda stopping me from writing.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:27 pm

<After reviewing some evidence...Sora's even more awesome than I thought. Not only is: Sora>Roxas, it's also: Sora>>>>>Roxas>

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Post  NebulaGregarZX on Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:35 am

<Enough. You like Roxas better? I won't disagree. You like Sora better? Okay, fine. You think his opinion is wrong? *Loads shotgun* You have violated the code of etiquette. Take the arguament to PMs so as not to clutter this topic. Seriously. OR you could just stop arguing entirely. Sora>Roxas, but Whats_Up4444 like Roxas better. I don't see the reason to have a conflict. It's a "What if" Fan-fic anyway.>

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:10 am

<Yeah. It will do that. Let's just end it here and now.>

<Lastly, never promise something when you don't have it ready. >_>>

<I've been writing other stories and parts of this fic instead of the beginning so far. I've been doing the ending to this, (Fight scenes are not done. Has no ending but does have an ending. It's not written. My Death Note fanfic. The Mark of Mastery exam for The Dark Bloodline. The Defenders of the Shadows with khfreak. The Nexas battle. The intruders battle. Zane's accidental cheating in TITAL. Alexis from the future in TITAL. TV. GameFAQs. GAH! I need a life. >_>>
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Post  khfreak358 on Wed Apr 13, 2011 1:16 am

<Don't we all?>

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:03 am

<Dammit khfreak that's my line!>

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Post  khfreak358 on Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:13 pm

<Too bad! I stolez it!>

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:50 pm

<Va al infierno, perra>

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Post  khfreak358 on Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:10 am

<Well, then. Bruja!>

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:13 am

<Oh, are you really gonna do that? Besa mi culo.>

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Post  khfreak358 on Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:24 am

<Sorry, I'm straight.>

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Sat Apr 16, 2011 12:26 am

<...Lame. Mi. Mierda. Hijo. De perra.>

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